tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post5324342051427325413..comments2023-10-23T12:31:30.021-07:00Comments on A Day In My Life: My Visual PoemDiego Hernandezhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11658409452636950668noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-3826454142280695752014-11-14T13:04:19.002-08:002014-11-14T13:04:19.002-08:00I like the GoPro shots you had in there!! Really a...I like the GoPro shots you had in there!! Really awesome!<br />In the end there was a part you could've covered with b-Roll<br />Awesome poem!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16947867219282204985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-90111436412517929842014-11-14T13:02:59.379-08:002014-11-14T13:02:59.379-08:00Your visuals of adventure were great
Little clip o...Your visuals of adventure were great<br />Little clip of recording at end<br />Nice natural soundAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11608740407133893405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-19773987618565649572014-11-14T13:02:22.830-08:002014-11-14T13:02:22.830-08:00I like all the different b-roll shots.
You could h...I like all the different b-roll shots.<br />You could have leveled the audio.<br />I also like the lyrics of the poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10105994884629762738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-21704912978111050562014-11-14T13:02:06.283-08:002014-11-14T13:02:06.283-08:00Love the shots of the zip-line and Hanalei Pier. C...Love the shots of the zip-line and Hanalei Pier. Could have stabilized some shots so they weren't shaky. Love the idea of the poem.Daileenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00208522523407843022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-83659526739026067342014-11-14T13:02:00.044-08:002014-11-14T13:02:00.044-08:00I loved the shots of going down the zip-line! The ...I loved the shots of going down the zip-line! The shot of the skateboard is really shaky. I really like the shot of going under the water I think you should have held that shot a little longer.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02543855869672972744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-74430380716859830092014-11-14T13:01:48.221-08:002014-11-14T13:01:48.221-08:00I like the shot of you jumping off the pier
The sh...I like the shot of you jumping off the pier<br />The shot of someone surfing was a bit loud.<br />I like the shot of you ziplining.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-24294271062592581122014-11-14T13:01:47.701-08:002014-11-14T13:01:47.701-08:00WOW!!! Really Good B-Roll !!! Great Action!
The au...WOW!!! Really Good B-Roll !!! Great Action!<br />The audio when the person was surfing was to loud.<br />I wish I did that every day!Meagan Mahikoahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11738756293458763654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-27758057738250174492014-11-14T13:01:42.603-08:002014-11-14T13:01:42.603-08:00Compliment: I liked your visuals. They were clear ...Compliment: I liked your visuals. They were clear and they matched with your audio.<br />Criticism: I think it was great. No comment<br />Compliment: I liked your poem. You described everything really well. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00217796224579392888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-66500178278523047072014-11-14T13:01:40.381-08:002014-11-14T13:01:40.381-08:00Has good shots with the go pro and action of the e...Has good shots with the go pro and action of the events fit the story<br />It shows your a-roll at the endComrade Dokihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09574625167693002776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-1066879132324039002014-11-14T13:01:38.658-08:002014-11-14T13:01:38.658-08:00like the shots
lots of camera movement
overall gre...like the shots<br />lots of camera movement<br />overall great jobCara Griffinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14411275204958807613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-86704291187237689552014-11-14T13:01:37.664-08:002014-11-14T13:01:37.664-08:00good audio
heard some backround noise unless that ...good audio<br />heard some backround noise unless that was part of it<br />good b-rollAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02220389223608997814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-48183551828941986312014-11-14T13:01:29.071-08:002014-11-14T13:01:29.071-08:00I really like how you got a video in the water.
I ...I really like how you got a video in the water.<br />I think one thing that could be better is the part at the very end.<br />I also like all of your b-roll. TaylorChanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13730206277412285784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-65836199300664512832014-11-14T13:01:24.618-08:002014-11-14T13:01:24.618-08:00Great B-roll
Louder Music
Awesome Intersting shots...Great B-roll<br />Louder Music<br />Awesome Intersting shots<br />rAGHAV kUMARhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02289593056227119570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-59273763622076131962014-11-14T13:01:15.488-08:002014-11-14T13:01:15.488-08:00Whoa great action shots! You couldve turned the ba...Whoa great action shots! You couldve turned the background sounds down a little they were a tiny bit distracting. I loved your transition from the shot when the camera was in the water!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07281478818444781123noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-40429232687189228242014-11-14T13:01:12.337-08:002014-11-14T13:01:12.337-08:00really cool shots, could have text layovers, were ...really cool shots, could have text layovers, were is that skate spot?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07680032598530606814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-28549126457652601732014-11-14T13:01:11.774-08:002014-11-14T13:01:11.774-08:00Compliment:The b-roll was really unique (plus the ...Compliment:The b-roll was really unique (plus the underwater scene!)<br />Area of Improvement:I got nothing<br />Compliment:IT made me want to do something totally awesome and dangerous!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11976940207752855076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-70028780712326978102014-11-14T13:01:00.384-08:002014-11-14T13:01:00.384-08:00Your poem was great! Your poetry was awesome!
You ...Your poem was great! Your poetry was awesome!<br />You might have wanted a steadier hand for some of the shots.<br />I love how the effects you added in helped it and it didn't take away from the theme by having an excess amount of it. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05329489500535688128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-55295369735162438092014-11-14T13:00:59.730-08:002014-11-14T13:00:59.730-08:00Compliment: I liked your B-Roll and the actual sho...Compliment: I liked your B-Roll and the actual shots of your family going on adventures and stuff<br />Criticism: Nothing, it was great.<br />Compliment: I really liked your poem and the music that you put with it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17217335643428793435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-42692407614674007082014-11-14T13:00:56.137-08:002014-11-14T13:00:56.137-08:00good lyrics
needs a better background sound
good v...good lyrics<br />needs a better background sound<br />good visualsNathan Scott Gardberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01764116027874974732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-33572478348378478512014-11-14T13:00:37.590-08:002014-11-14T13:00:37.590-08:00The b-roll was mighty impressive
At the end, it sh...The b-roll was mighty impressive<br />At the end, it showed a small bit of the chair, no b-roll<br />The shot of you jumping into the water, then transforming into that skating shot. Tyler_Pagelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096696421029722917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-22635238644614843132014-11-14T13:00:33.722-08:002014-11-14T13:00:33.722-08:00I like the B-rolls!
One thing that could be better...I like the B-rolls!<br />One thing that could be better nothing<br />I really like your B-roll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Jaesha Matahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10418707066431985571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-35413193293101155462014-11-14T13:00:27.362-08:002014-11-14T13:00:27.362-08:00Really nice transition from the jump!
I think that...Really nice transition from the jump!<br />I think that the beach shot was too loud.<br />Really Nice B-roll and nice purpose in all!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10569918190513508708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-40992252905087566842014-11-14T13:00:18.175-08:002014-11-14T13:00:18.175-08:00I love the backround noises, they're really co...I love the backround noises, they're really cool<br />The music being a bit louder would have been awesome<br />Your actual poem was AWESOMEMichael Gremsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15432230186365541258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463343706500120505.post-46480613716663368722014-11-14T12:59:57.403-08:002014-11-14T12:59:57.403-08:00good audio
cover the end
and good brollgood audio<br />cover the end<br />and good brollEthen Garrisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02139670131025297053noreply@blogger.com